One of the most complex part of the stringing
process has been the identification of the identity of Ersatz group in this
world. I’m really divided by the possibilities of stringing, as there are
characteristics that are lost in one while this one has what the other doesn’t.
See, I have two main proposals. There are times
when one feels the most opportune, while at other times I’m clinging for the
other one. The attempt to blend them in one has been proving itself to be quite
hard as well.
So one of them is the classical one where
Ersatz is a reign that rivals Ilium as the supremacy of a region. I like this
one because it’s good for the stringed world. It is nice for the story as it
is. What I really like about the Invaders version is that it could be related
to history as Germanic tribes invaded Rome. It’s one of these nice details that
add the feeling of having deep roots in the foundation of my project.
The second suggestion is that Ersatz is a crime
group working inside Ilium, which works as keeping Ilium entirely a representation
of myself, with all good and bad things inside. They would also be working with
the less morbid but equally dangerous saboteers involving mostly mindtrap
muggers that bring crime and corruption to the city. It makes more sense in the
psychological point of view, and it would give this version the equivalent
feeling of deep roots that the other version has with History.
There are some things I need to keep in mind,
though. I’ve once used to separate scourgers as Ersatz and Lazurian and also
Zhàn, but I think in the end they might all be the same, so I need to
understand more precisely what it means to have a Lazurian and Zhàn Scourger
that differs them from the Ersatz one. And since I’ve brought the Veszprem
allies, I’ve been reevaluating what it means to have them all being enemies.
After all, Shaytan meaning Life, could be benevolent sometimes. My life isn’t
just bad luck all the time.
The most delicate point that I must work
carefully, though, and makes the complete difference between those two versions,
is the point that Ilium and Ersatz are very
deeply connected. Their existence revolves around each other. They are like
sibling essences. They quite need each other sometimes.
As I write this text I can slowly define what
they really mean and what I need to have, and I’m slowly making my decision.
But it’s not going to happen so easily as I need to have my mind pondering the
facts cautiously. I need more time to focus in this problem alone, a manual
labor of decision, since the automatic resolve I’ve always resolved and I’ve
been waiting for doesn’t seem to be working.
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